Tie Dye Hero

I'm notoriously good at dodging self-esteem blows... no matter how true they are.

Thanks Fand :) Yeah... sometimes its a pain in the butt to be sketchy...espcially when it rains.

I am not jealous either. ?

Hey Stabs :D didn't know you were over here too!

^I was afraid it was being overused. I've never had a critique be critiqued before. hm

I question some of your word choices in the first stanza... Tin doens't seem to fit, and neither does 'ill person' i'm not sure if you mean sick person, or ...

The title is spelled wrong. Anyways, and forgiving, to those they know. doesn't make sense... forgiving those they know? Is that what you mean? You need some extra clarity there. ...

The rhyme scheme seems so forces...especially with the occasional false rhyme...and... there is one couplet that doesn't rhyme at all! If you are going to adhere to a rhyme scheme, ...

This poem adheres to a very basic rhyme scheme. I think rhyme schemes are very weak..but seeing as that is the structure you've chosen...I won't attack it to brutally. This ...

Hey I see you've meandered on over here as well.

I'll take that as a compliment! Thank you

Hey Imelda. :D

Thank you Claudette. and don't let Imelda dishearten you... she's bitter because I make fun of chocolate.

Well... now we just need to find a planet where we can live after we screw the earth up so much we can't live here anymore. It could happen. ...its ...

Hey Hypo... are you going to behave now??